夹叙夹议作文评讲与指导(英语) 说课稿

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请用自己亲身经历或发生在身边的事例说明“帮助他人就是帮助自己”的道理。
【在完全了解了夹叙夹议作文的写作之后，趁热打铁进行该类型作文的训练，规定学生在20分钟内完成对该文章的审题和写作，要把握好写作的速度】
六 Check and evaluation(评估与检查)：
1 写好之后同桌之间互评：
① 检查全文结构安排是不是合理。
② 检查拼写，标点，时态，语态以及人称的一致。
③ 划出高级词汇和复杂句型结构。
【通过一步一步的检查指导，让学生掌握作文写好之后如何进行有步骤有重点的检查，检查些什么内容，并学会赏析一些好词好句】
2 交上来教师评估
【教师对每一位学生的作文进行批改和点评，必要的话要进行面批和指导，从而提高学生对该类型作文的写作的水平。】

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附：学生的范文
今年我国许多地区遭遇五十年一遇的雪灾天气，造成了巨大的经济损失，但也正是这场大雪让人们感受到守望相助，八方支援的关爱情怀。请写下在这场大雪中你所经历或听说的一个故事并谈谈你的感受。
This winter, it snowed so heavily that disasters happened in many areas of our country. Terrible as the weather was, a story moved me deeply
It was on a cold evening that a girl was on her way home. The ground was so slippery that she fell down. At that moment, a young man came up and helped her stand up and gave her a pair of socks, which could protect her from falling down again, disappearing without leaving his name or address
While a pair of socks  doesn’t cost much, it is the spirit of the young man that deserves our learning from. We should be always ready to help others, especially in terrible situations. As a song sings, if everyone helps each other the world will become better. With the opening of 2008 Olympics and 2010 Expo, we should also show our best to tourists and athletes.
Although the disaster made us suffer a lot, we have gained a lot, with sharing helping each other.
以朋友为题写一篇作文。该文必须包含一下内容：
1 你生活中所看到或所经历的一段交友的故事。
2 该故事对你产生的影响以及你的想法。
范文一
Friends are very important in out lives. However, not every attempt to make a friend is successful. From these “failures”, we can know better how to develop friendship.
I still remember that in the second grade of primary school, I was distributed a Japanese pen pal. I was given her mailing address, and was told to keep in touch with her. Our correspondence lasted two rounds before I could not receive her reply. However, she was not so important to me, and I didn’t write again.
This short-lived friendship now is a regret to me, yet it indeed was difficult for me to contimue at that time. We began to write to each other as a result of a program between our primary schools, so our friendship was not based on our own needs and did not have a firm ground. Therefore I learned that friendship needs a self-willing ground to grow. A friendship based solely on external forces cannot last long in time and in our memory.
范文二
When I was little, Zhang was not a good choice to make friends with because he had dark skin and looked ugly. I didn’t play with him, didn’t talk to him and even walked away when he approached. However, one afternoon, when I was stopped by several teenagers and threatened to give them money, it was Zhang that stood out, shouted loudly and made those people run away. I was very grateful at that time and began to notice him closely.
Of course, we made friends at last. In addition to that brave move, I found out more merits in him under the dark skin and ugly face.
Thanks to Zhang’s being my friend. I learned a lesson earlier than others. One can never judge a person from his appearance. Though a man might have some shortcomings on the outside, that doesn’t mean his inner quality is also bad. On the contrary, most of the time they’ll try their best to be even more warm-hearted to balance the loss of the beauty. If we simply ignore these people, we’ll lose a lot of good friends.
Furthermore, not only people but everything follows that rule. The apperance is always fake, and to make full use of everything, we must see the truth underneath and care nothing about its being beautiful or terrible

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